Saturday, January 9, 2010

Death is not the greatest loss in life, The greatest loss is when relationship dies between two people while they are still alive"

My heart was as closed
As a forgotten old box in the attic
Denying every relation
Denying every bond
That was my habit

Then you came
To force me out of the attic
You begged me to see the sunshine
You hold me till the Moon light

I kept telling you
It won’t work, it’s not meant to stay
Your teary eyes stared right into my heart
“I will walk away from you, if you want me too”
Holding my hand you said.

But weak as I was
Vulnerable as I was
Enjoying the heat of the sunshine
Enjoying the warmth of the moonlight
I hold on to you to enjoy my new sight
Now too scared to go back to the attic
To go back to the endless moonless night

Then it happened
Something I always feared
Your hold loosened
As began the story of my tears

My hand that you hold with such passion
Suddenly became burden to you
Now you compare me to the world
And you started looking for something new

I was so use to of this sunshine
I was in love with our moonlight
But I won’t beg you to stay
B’ coz in your life I have no say!

You took the box out
You make me open it for the world and you
I use to treat my heart like a box
Now the world treats it like that too!!

Written by - Ritika Patel


  1. omg! its really really wonderful...
    its awwsome

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  3. Thanks @Payal .... M Glad you liked it !!!

  4. Mohabbat Se Mohabbat Na Mili,
    To Pyaar Ne Doosra Rasta Dhoonda,
    Dil Se Dil Na Mile,Tou Kya Howa
    Yaar Ne Kisi Aur Ka Pyaar Dhoonda

  5. This is a fantastic piece of your work. This is Ritika. And I loved the title. So true.

  6. @Vishal .. Thank you... Title is not written by me but it went with the flow of the poem so used it rather then giving it another title.

    N yes Its a part of me in here ..
    Thanks you for the compliment glad you liked it..



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