Monday, July 18, 2011

!!! In this Life & the Next !!!

Falling in the hollow depths of my heart
Like time rolling, tearing us apart
If today is not today,and
You & I are not, one thread's end.....

Then,
In another place in another time
I would be the ocean's calm
In another world, another life
You would be the wind's alarm

Drugged by the fury of passion
Life in painful path of learning lessons
If my soul had not been your home
Had I not been infected with your love alone

Then,
In another place in another time
I would be the epipheral figures in the clouds
In another world, another life
You would be the thunder breaking them to rain, aloud

Climbing on the ladders of childhood dreams
With the one, fantazies of whom always streamed
Had I not been aloof, caring about love, too less
And,If you hadn't broken the bonds of past, with a caress

Then,
In another place in another time
I would be the night, abondoned by the moon's light
In another world, another life
You would be the time, turning me into the dawn's shine


Written By: Ritika Patel

In here at this time, in this world and in this life, you are mine forever and always..!!!
In another world in another life...you would still be mine ..!!!

7 comments:

  1. Wow...an update after so long !

    Nice one...liked the flow of it :)
    Take Care.

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  2. It was phrased long back but got a chance now to post it .,.. it was long due ..... btw it feels good to accept comments after so long.... thanks :))

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  3. Wow, that was beautiful.. often I think how can someone pen so gently.

    Weakest LINK

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  4. ... Then,
    In another place in another time
    I would be the night, abondoned by the moon's light
    In another world, another life
    You would be the time, turning me into the dawn's shine

    thats an awesome phrase... what a beauty

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  5. this is really beautiful, well written!

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  6. @ Rachit : Thanks for such a lovely comment :)
    @ Bhargav : :)))))) ... My fav lines these are ..

    @ Broadway : Thnk you

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  7. In another world, another life
    You would be the time, turning me into the dawn's shine
    Lovely :)
    Beautiful post :)
    Love, Ayushi :)

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