Wednesday, July 28, 2010

!!! Rage of Unspoken Emotions !!!

Disgusted from my heart
With this natures virtue of life
As I stood in the line
Waiting for my share of Shine

I live with the rules of my nurturing
Morals I walked on, clutching
Dreams I believed on, hoping
Relationships I worked on, Trusting

All shattered with a deafening thud on my "Life's" Ground
As I waited for My Stars to Shine Down..

As I walked on the edge of destiny
Hands clutched me on this ride, so topsy & turvy
I cannot fathom the price they asked in returned
Because of them now I shun my heart, so broken

Laughing memoirs of happiness and warmth,
Reflected through the tear I dropped on my broken crown
As I waited for My Stars to Shine Down

Continued to walk aimlessly
Awareness lost in the illusions of reality
Offering insolence, grudging over my destiny
Hoping for courage to avenge for life's cruelty

I gainsaid the god's game asking for a showdown
As I waited for My Stars to Shine Down

Those hands asked for a filthy price
They supported me once but now they made me fall
Blinding me as they flaunted their own shine

I never invaded others dream
I never questioned others sheen
Then Why, when I am in the dark alley
They flaunt their meaningless trophy

When My heart only prayed for them to win the crown
In front of them they expect me to bow
When I still await my Stars to Shine down

Stabbing pain of heart, life so impossible
Burning tears, vision so impossible
Choked throat, speech so impossible

Broken strength, Faith so impossible:
For my Life to gain the Momentum..
For the Light to show me the Direction..
For the Reasons behind the Broken Relations..
For Explanations behind Failed Initiations..
For Dusk that never reached the Dawn
As I still await for My Stars To Shine Down....

Written By - Ritika Patel in "rage"



  2. so much of rage.....powerful words....second stanza is awesum....evry word left wid a painful impression....

    n yes ur stars will definitely shine :)

  3. Don't worry.Difinitely ur stars will shine down oneday.

  4. @Pratibha .. Welcome to my blog ... Yes there was considerable pain behind every word .. m glad my words can give out the right feeling of emotions felt during penning it down...n..thank You for dropin by...

    @Poonam: :) I smiled reading your comment coz even that is my fav. stanza too ..n I hope they do shine :)

    @Anonymous ... Thank you for dropping by.. hope to see you more.

  5. those are strong emotions... greatly worded... there is one quote i remember...
    "Dont face reality... let it be the place from where you leap"

  6. trust yourself, hold on to your beliefs and they will come true..

  7. @chaitanya : do you really think we should not face reality? LEaping form it will leave you unhealed .. healing is the righteous process of living life.. :)
    Thank you for this wonderful comment and sharing this great proverb ... keep dropin by hope to see you more :)

  8. @rajat: I am trying to do exactly that though it is making me exhausted but still at least am trying :)

  9. a touching poem...just remember “Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance you must keep moving” -Albert Einstein

  10. I suppose this is about anger or rage against broken relations, let me tell you if one star shines down, i,e the Sun, million of other stars lit up the sky, one just need to choose his own compatible star, the star of each other's lives ! i wonder what to make out of the pic, is the girl falling down, but yet her soul reaching towards heaven..something like that, anyway liked the second stanza a lot.

  11. @Sunil: It is much more just the broken relations ..... its about the ruthless people yu meet along the way ....... its about how people take pride in taking happiness in your misery .... its about people who weigh their success by flaunting it in front of those who struggles... the girl is inrage and wants to get away from her surrent state of mind and the bondages that others have tied around her thinking she is weak .... and so that she should not get up and move ahead of others who take undefinable hapiness in seeig her the way she is ....

    Thanks for your comment and appreciation on my blog ... hope to see you more:))

  12. Simply superb Ritz, the way you have expressed is amaaaaaaaaaaaazing... weighing ur words carefully to express ur powerful thought & feelings behind it !!! Very expressive !!

  13. @ Sudha and Rajendra : thank you very much guys ....:)
    Every word means a lot ....!


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