Wednesday, February 2, 2011

!!! Convenience of Escapism !!!

Have you ever had a magical moment when you felt two strongly opposite emotions? Love/Hate? Elation/Sadness? Anger/Sympathy? The desire to move forward yet run away at the same time? I am sure you have a story to tell too, share your thought as a comment here or on theClose - Up Facebook page. This post is participating in a contest, please vote for me onINDIBLOGGER by clicking on it and promote there, if you want me to win! Thanks!

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First time I saw you in the Gala
Dancing in the arms of my better half
The warmth of his body failed completely
to divert the heat of passion coming from your eyes
I lost myself in your sight, And followed you out of the dome
In that shimmery full moon night

They say your spouse is the part of your soul
I love him from the bottom of my heart but you …
You gave me those lost pieces and made me whole
With your every touch the guilt spread in my veins like fire
But your presence was like a drug, that nothing else mattered

I took care of him, and loved him and made him my life
And then I leave him, I lie to him, I betray him everyday
When I walk into your home, hands in hands
I cry a little everyday for killing him like this
And then I smile looking at your sms of our next meet
Hardly could I wait for that raging passion to began

He loves me, he takes care of me, I know I am his life
But Then he trusts me more than I deserve
He shuts his eyes and escapes reasonability
When I don't reply his calls and sms’s when I am with you
And he carefully forgets to ask questions When I come back
And he carefully denies that I am covered with you

I look at him and hate myself, I cry and I scream
I make myself a promise that I wont rip my self apart like this
Lying beside you I made a promise, this is it I wont do it again
Though I love you but I love him too
You don't belong to me, But I belong to him now and forever
And I left you fallen and broken and crying
And as I moved out I know I am walking over your heart & Mine

Whenever I get late he stays up for me
With my favourite Mocha kept carefully beside the table
I looked at him and his killer smile which lights up
Every time I walk towards him,
As usual he didn't ask and didn't probe
We chatted half way through the night
And then I fell asleep in his arms, happy about the end of my dual life

The morning was clearer than many in the past
It was new and it was better but I feel the void building inside
Which you filled up and now without you I feel lost again
No, I wont think about you
I will stick to what my destiny has chosen for me

As I reached my bedroom
cursing my weakness of giving into your thoughts
I saw that now, I know, for some time I suspected
But I see now,the red marks on his shirt lying on the wash
And another ,
An anklet hooked in a sheet, which I picked up 2 years back for our room

He was a lousy cleaner, May be that’s why
Everything seems to be too perfectly placed nowadays
Is this Why he never probed me,
Because he was busy keeping me from probing

I stood there for a long time
Holding the shirt in one hand and the sheet in the other
Numbness got redefined that day for me
I was angry for his betrayal
Sad to know that its not working for both of us
Broken to know that all we share with each other is just “guilt”
Confused thinking, what we will be like,
when we will stop feeling even guilty for each other

I stood there for a long - long time
Before I reached for my cell
Saw your numerous calls and messages
And replied in few but self assured words
“I will see you at the same place, same time”
Love.
I waited till the cell beeped with
“Message Delivered”

And then I started with my daily chores….
As I felt relief spreading through my last core…

Written By- Ritika Patel


Have you ever had a magical moment when you felt two strongly opposite emotions? Love/Hate? Elation/Sadness? Anger/Sympathy? The desire to move forward yet run away at the same time?I am sure you have a story to tell too, share your thought as a comment here or on theClose - Up Facebook page. This post is participating in a contest, please vote for me on INDIBLOGGER by clicking on it and promote there, if you want me to win! Thanks!


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15 comments:

  1. Very well written, Ms Patel. Liked the way u blended modernity into the poem (the calls, sms).Enjoyed it. All the best :)

    Here's my story:
    http://fu-ck-lo-ve.blogspot.com/2011/02/fire-freeze-moment-of-my-life.html#comments

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  2. Hi there, -
    First time here, and I must say quite impressed with the choice of subject you ve taken up.i think you've captured the essence of life quite well - contradictions and complexities.What goes around comes around.!

    Cheers
    GB

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  3. Very well written indeed. The anguish one may go through being unfaithful to their spouse must surely be unimaginable. But then, life comes full circle when the same is being done from the 'other half', as you so rightly put it. Well thought out.

    Do check out my thoughts.
    Mixed Up

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  4. Loved the combination of poetry with this topic. nice one...
    I have also tried to write something on this topic.
    Gathaa

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  5. @Raj : Thank u so much ....

    @Pramod : Thank you so much .... hope to see you more..

    @Gyanban : Thank you so much for your wonderul comment ... U r right ... wot goes around comes around ....Karma ...

    @D2 : Thnks for the lovely comment ....I read yours too and voted too very nice I must say

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  6. nice rhythm of interwining of emotions

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  7. Wow . Nice interwining of emotions

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  8. Hey.

    It was indeed a great poem of you trying to know more about yourself, your emotions and explore more of you.

    As somebody truly has said life is a boomerang and your poem explains the Newton's third law of action and reaction!

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  9. Nice... strong! Well written. Congrats.

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  10. liked the roller coaster of emotions in your poem.very beautifully expressed and done justice to the subject you chose.well done!

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  11. Beautifully written. The writing had a smooth flow in ti. Really enjoyed my stay here :)

    By the way, hope you enjoy reading my post too -
    To hold you in my arms, to promise you my love!

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  12. Nice poem.Emotions expressed in a flow..:)Thanks for reading my story n voting.
    www.raji1082.blogspot.com

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